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Falling Softly
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Falling Softly |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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The pitter patter splatters in streams sliding smoothly to be embraced by this very time and place being absorbed in this fiord at one with earth rising in cycles, reaching the skies gathering in clouds passing by to come again, another day falling softly sweet sounds of rain. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I love the lines of this song, That only a Gentle Spirit could have composed- With small and gentle hands.. "The pitter patter splatters in streams sliding smoothly to be embraced by this very time and place" ee was wrong.. "nobody,not even the rain, has such small hands" But he did not read this poem. "to come again, another day falling softly sweet sounds of rain." I think he would have liked it though, as much as I do...  _ _ __ _ __ice ><> |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
A peaceful poem. I like it very much. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Donna...very lovely. Hugs YOU!! In the midst of winter, |
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elpoeta Junior Member
since 2006-01-17
Posts 15Puerto Rico |
The unseen beauty of rain, you've done an excellent job of portraying the very essence of even a single drop. Mike I went to the woods because I wanted to live life deliberately... |
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CRK220888 New Member
since 2006-01-18
Posts 6 |
Great Poem. The images that you can picture from it are wonderful!! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
ah, much enjoyed this lady, it has been long that rain has not fallen where I live, this was like a breath of fresh air |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Rain is wonderful, lovely writing Julie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is so lovely and peaceful, wish it here, please, as we have a blizzard. Beautiful Donna. I love your voice. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Your words fall as softly as the rain and it must have been them that fell so gently on my forest last night. - Owl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
this trickled down the page ever so softly... lovely Bella m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful! JL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so much friends for your kind replies. I much appreciate you each. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Not only do I love the sound of rain, but also the smell of it... so clean and somehow renewing... Nice job with this Donna. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
IT RAINED HERE TODAY. MY GRANDCHILD ASKED ABOUT HOW RAIN IS MADE. rising in cycles, reaching the skies gathering in clouds passing by I SHARED THIS PROCESS, THROUGH YOUR BRILLIANT STORYTELLING, WITH MY GRANDCHILD. SHE LOVED THE EXPLAINATION! THANKS SO MUCH. LOVE CONNIE I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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