Open Poetry #37 |
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A Moment of Somewhere in Time |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
A Moment of Somewhere in Time Clever, this instantaneous sentient which knows, in avoiding those that are mundane, shunning customary ticks that walk our day into night to know when to clutch this moment of somewhere in time, that sense of awe by which to surprise, blazing sparks that flare and flicker, sparkle and twinkle, burst into explode… did it not catch you? Oh, seize the day, they say, carpe diem all the way and yet, and yet, how long shall this blessed moment last, less than soul’s intake of breath, earlier than a wink, breathless as an age held in dust… as that schism of nerve tells the hairs on one’s arm tingle now! To study the width and breadth of this, my moment under your touch is to know a moment of somewhere in time. ![]() ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 1 August 2002 Reprised, following a midnight's touch and to be followed by that very dream |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"To study the width and breadth of this, my moment under your touch is to know a moment of somewhere in time." Karilea...you had to know how much I love this!! Thank you for starting my day with shivers of smiles. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Understanding this, sissie....and you wrote it so beautifully! ![]() |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Recognition of the good, bad and the in between is essential in order to fully appreciate a gift. very well said Karilea. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
ah, the days, the moments, the touches...we are given a life time...one day at time......this seems to be on my mind as well lady.....you write it beautifully |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh my lady.... you never cease to amaze me and make me so very proud of you. HUGS |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the life within your words a truly blessed moment |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Awesome Lady Sunshine! :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"as that schism of nerve tells the hairs on one’s arm tingle now!" ~ and that they just did!!!! Kudos to you, Lady Karilea, on such a blazing, sparkling, flaring, flickering, sparkling and twinkling piece of explosive writing! Love & Sun Light, Linda ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'following a midnight's touch' Indeed ... well done~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Dear lady, may you come to know it -- and know it in time! |
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