Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2006-04-15
08:24 AM
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Casting
The dyes that cast my mind in glaze Is the wondering of my maze? It’s the spirit and the phantoms core Of my wonder of the evermore
A Dante full of catacombs The constant wave the reaching foams A bath within illusions light A shawl of sparkling stars at night
A rivers course that reaches sea The was and all that is to be The dancing and philandering The romance and the pandering
It is the mote surrounds the wall It is the moaning and the call It is confusion fills my sail It over runs my cup of bale
It seems I cannot change my bed Nor can I shed the ill of dread
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
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2006-04-15
08:45 AM
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Good morning, T-Man!
I was especially moved by the creativity of the following lines:
"A Dante full of catacombs The constant wave the reaching foams A bath within illusions light A shawl of sparkling stars at night"
Love & Star Light, EA
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shades of paul
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In Reality
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2006-04-15
09:03 AM
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"A rivers course that reaches the sea". Well done, and liked much. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you
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Mysteria
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2006-04-15
12:29 PM
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Now that was simply beautiful Sy. Loved everything about this one. Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem
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Seymour Tabin
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2006-04-15
01:03 PM
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Earth Angel You are an angel.
paul Appreciate, thank you.
Sharon, Thank you sweety.
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Honeybunch
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South Africa
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2006-04-15
01:58 PM
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I have to ditto Earth Angel's quote - lovely lines and a good read. Thanks.
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Magnus
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2006-04-15
02:59 PM
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Seems that as years pass..we watch our moments, some staying...other slipping into the mist of our past...Good Afternoon Sir Sy of Tabin.
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Seymour Tabin
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2006-04-15
03:07 PM
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Honeybunch Thank you dear for the read and reply.
Magnus That's true thank you my friend.
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passing shadows
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displaced
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2006-04-15
06:09 PM
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nice to read you Sy
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Seymour Tabin
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2006-04-15
06:13 PM
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passing, Nice to have you read me.
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tracie66
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Australia
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2006-04-15
08:41 PM
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very touching dear Sy - wonderful read. ~hugs~ TracieLove is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing
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Seymour Tabin
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2006-04-15
10:15 PM
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Tracie, Thank you so much.
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The Lady
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The Southwest
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2006-04-16
01:57 AM
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I was also grasped by that second verse. Outstanding Sir.
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iliana
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USA
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2006-04-16
03:44 AM
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Happy Day, Sy! May the confusion fade and the drawbridge be released! ....jo
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Seymour Tabin
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2006-04-16
07:46 AM
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Lady, Thank you for the read and reply.
iliana, A sweet thought, thank you.
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Ratleader
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2006-04-20
12:12 PM
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Confusion fills my sail.....many many good images in this poem, bits of clarity that move it....but that one really gets me!~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________
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Seymour Tabin
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2006-04-20
08:34 AM
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Ratleader Thank you for the read and kind comment.
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