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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Casting The dyes that cast my mind in glaze Is the wondering of my maze? It’s the spirit and the phantoms core Of my wonder of the evermore A Dante full of catacombs The constant wave the reaching foams A bath within illusions light A shawl of sparkling stars at night A rivers course that reaches sea The was and all that is to be The dancing and philandering The romance and the pandering It is the mote surrounds the wall It is the moaning and the call It is confusion fills my sail It over runs my cup of bale It seems I cannot change my bed Nor can I shed the ill of dread |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, T-Man! I was especially moved by the creativity of the following lines: "A Dante full of catacombs The constant wave the reaching foams A bath within illusions light A shawl of sparkling stars at night" Love & Star Light, EA  |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
"A rivers course that reaches the sea". Well done, and liked much. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was simply beautiful Sy. Loved everything about this one.  Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are an angel.  paul Appreciate, thank you. Sharon, Thank you sweety. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I have to ditto Earth Angel's quote - lovely lines and a good read. Thanks. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seems that as years pass..we watch our moments, some staying...other slipping into the mist of our past...Good Afternoon Sir Sy of Tabin. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Thank you dear for the read and reply. Magnus That's true thank you my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice to read you Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Nice to have you read me. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
very touching dear Sy - wonderful read. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, Thank you so much. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I was also grasped by that second verse. Outstanding Sir. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Happy Day, Sy! May the confusion fade and the drawbridge be released! ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you for the read and reply. iliana, A sweet thought, thank you. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Confusion fills my sail.....many many good images in this poem, bits of clarity that move it....but that one really gets me! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader Thank you for the read and kind comment. |
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