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miscellanea
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0 posted 2006-04-13 09:20 PM



Navel moon aglow
at the birthing of the night
Treefrogs praise delight.


© Copyright 2006 Cathy Farmer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-04-13 09:57 PM


Beautiful...this is so serene!
Hugs~Nancy

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  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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2 posted 2006-04-13 10:04 PM



Five a.m. mooning
glowing yellow in windows
seeking thought of you


miscellanea
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3 posted 2006-04-13 10:48 PM


Enchantress,
   The moon was just so gorgeous tonight with a golden orange halo and corona.   It begged to be written.  Glad you felt the serenity.  Always good to hear from you, Nancy.
                          cathy

Sunshine,
    Yes, a new day 5:00 begins!  Great to hear from you again in poetic form!  Smiling big.
                         cathy

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4 posted 2006-04-14 12:32 PM


Perfect!  *hugs*...jo
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5 posted 2006-04-14 12:36 PM


The moon has been beautiful...what I like is the way it lights everything on the ground with an ethereal glow.
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6 posted 2006-04-14 09:31 AM


Misc~
Absolute perfection !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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miscellanea
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7 posted 2006-04-14 04:31 PM


iliana, Martie, Marge,

   Thank you for sharing the moment with me.  I appreciate you so.

misc'e

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8 posted 2006-04-14 10:17 PM



Simply a delight...

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9 posted 2006-04-14 10:29 PM


I bow to your moonglow

wish I'd written it

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10 posted 2006-04-15 05:52 PM


Well, you made me open my dictionary, but I blame my norwegianess (can that ever pass for a real word?) for that. Anyway, enjoyed, short and to the essence

Love

"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"

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11 posted 2006-04-15 05:55 PM


treefrogs...I could do without them LOL

good poem!

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12 posted 2006-04-15 08:47 PM


lovely visual - wel done
~hugs~
Tracie

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It is the harmony of the universe
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Klassy Lassy
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13 posted 2006-04-16 12:47 PM


Definitely spring, almost feels like summer!  I can see the moon and hear the frogs in my mind.    Simply lovely!

~ Karen

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