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DarkShroud365
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0 posted 2006-04-11 11:13 PM



This is the book I wright for you, the one you will never read. It tells of all the feelings I so cleaverly hide from you. Each chapter is anotherreason for why I hold you dear. This is the book you'll never read.

This is the song that I sing for you, the one you will never hear. Every word drips with bitter-sweet longings to be with you. Each chorus sung with a desire to let you know. This is the song you will never hear.

This is the movie which I produce for you, the one you'll never watch. The stars carefully picked to portray a tragidy of great love left unsaid. Every line a message to your heart, hoping you will return the emotions so violently tugging at my brain.

This is me waiting everyday for you to relize a love you never knew.

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1 posted 2006-04-11 11:23 PM


Every line a message to your heart, hoping you will return the emotions so violently tugging at my brain.

This is me waiting everyday for you to relize a love you never knew''''


wow!! and welcome to pip, you will fit in nicely....

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

DarkShroud365
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2 posted 2006-04-12 09:01 AM


Thank You Greeneyes



JamesMichael
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3 posted 2006-04-13 08:11 PM


NIce...James
Bodger
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4 posted 2006-04-13 09:19 PM


From the heart

dave

DarkShroud365
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5 posted 2006-04-13 11:42 PM


Thank you both James and Dave for the kind words.
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