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Drinking Electricity.
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Drinking Electricity. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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The city lights expelling electricity into the air and we're drinking it in like it's new years drunk bodies charged and waiting for the sparks to fly drunk bodies waiting to collide because there is no touch and there is no current to force our bodies to move it's as vital as breath without it, without love, without anger, without sorrow without that spark breath is just a clock... ticking. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Great observations backed up by interesting metaphors...enjoyed this read..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool write here |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Intoxicating read! I drank in every word!  EA  |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I can't read your poems without leaving a message. I just love your writing, nothing more to say about that. Sometimes if you catch it just right the glow of a large city, especially your own, can seem so magestic and even beautiful. But to see the stars you must leave that ocean of current, and they are much more of a sight to behold. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I feel the same I would leave you the drunk but this is not about drunk This about having something and being prevented from delivering it and almost looking for anyway out Words are very good Dave |
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