She Took Me at the Wrong Time on Washing up

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Open Poetry #37

She Took Me at the Wrong Time on Washing up

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-04-11 04:12 PM

She took me
Between washing up in the wrong place
Wrong time
Too many suds
At the wrong time
To glaze over chipped crockery
To rinze and rinze and rinze

Images better glistening for a Viking's burial
On mounds of kitchens
Slowly sacking under the weight
Of reburshments

To guggle briefly in a mastercraft of all credit and debit cards

Flying as Mayfliers on trout and doubt

Of Peter Pan desires

And only before

and only afterwards

The word is now

Eight fifteen

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2006-04-12 07:33 AM

Good Morning Dave.
Wonderful read here.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-04-12 04:37 PM

Thanks Froggy

I am thinking of the old Rasberry Jam stuff

I might tempt a repost on one

dave

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