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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2006-04-10 11:06 PM



Tiny shell
along the colossus
where the island
wears the storm,

from what season
are your born,

have you now
your dream of freedom,
or from cushioned waters
onto frontline sands,  
has your tick of time
for now been tossed? /font>

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Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2006-04-10 11:09 PM


It is a pretty visual poem.  I'm not too sure where you are going, like are you talking about where the shell came from along the shoreline or what?  I'm not great at analyzing poems, but enjoying the feeling and visuals.  I enjoyed the visuals in this one.  Well done.

Sheri Adams

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2 posted 2006-04-10 11:27 PM


a beautiful ponderful write, Mish
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-04-12 08:33 AM


..."from what season, were you born"...

This struck me, in addition to the beauty that you consistently bring...
The records of creation are written in the rings of trees, and the layers of shell...

How rich the heritage that moves out from the circle.

Loved this!
TD

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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-04-12 09:41 AM


"where the island
wears the storm"

~ What a poetic way of phrasing it!

Love & Light,
Linda
Shell 2

Toerag
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5 posted 2006-04-12 09:49 AM


Say this title five times real fast...how are ya you good looking blond bombshell?
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2006-04-12 09:55 AM


love shells....

a certain puppy sent me shells and a candle once...

friends and shells...couldn't ask for more.

you always make me think Michele.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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