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Story from pip titles (It's that time again)
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Story from pip titles (It's that time again) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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I’m trying to pick up the pieces of night crawler shadows but today is the day of yesterday’s pressures and I haven’t yet had a change of heart. It’s kind of sad because love is being mauled by a Quaker Bear or a friend, a caring friend, just on waking from leftover dreams now grown bitter with age and I long to talk with thee, old Dan, about lovers in the tides of my life but you’re east below the clouds close to the supernatural and forefold vision ain’t been easy in the walk alone to a new world and I’m like Babylonia lost in confused hills. I send a message to you but can you spare a glance in between memories of young girls if I promise to have love examined (for Honeybunch)? She’s wearing protection, you see, like waterpocket zuitsuits softly and soulfully in a boots and backpack memory that is everything … yet nothing … when holding a ghost beyond broken borders. Come to me in a little light and hold me because I never say farewell to the rare and beautiful but there’s no breeze today to lift a cowboy up over only walls of emotion that don’t stop to think before goodbye. There’s a price to pay for creativity running raw, I guess it was a little too raw, and there may just be illiquid love if you don’t come back and write me a river because tomorrow is always new after the door is closed. Help me! I hate crossword puzzles and magic bottle blues and an old man laughing at the mistake and mistaken identity at the farmhouse – yours? I love to hold the other half open without closure and paint my heart by numbers: 0S7-XXIV, 0S6-H3, 0S5-S1, 0S4-H1, but who knows best? Our Lady of Lourdes likes overstuffed water balloons to sink to the bottom of the sea because it isn’t heaven to love when evenfall slow taken and flowers are damp. Hey Cowboy! Hey! Hey! Will you even notice a golden moment in the twenty more miles to Laredo? You can whisper because we all work on fragments. Michelle Beholden plays tag into the dark of wo-manipulation and alienation, stellar like leaders of genocide at Lisa Presley’s fourth wedding day but I’m just a worker who’s confused. What about you busy songwriting a country song of north sea where the Titanic breathes? Helen / 6 April 2006 |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen...it's that time again, to tell you how very well you do these!!!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Bravo!! I just love to be a part of these wonderful creations you do so wellthank you Helen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
LOL That was such a fun read! ~ and I even saw a few of my own titles in there! See how connected we all are! ~ And you just joined the dots! ~ and expertly at that! Loveya! Linda  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, my friends, and, yes, it's such fun writing them. I'm a joiner of dots then, Linda? Now that's what I call "unique"!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
fabulous Helen, very much enjoyed this... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hee-hee-ha-ha-ha!!! You gave me a Giggle! So good  JL |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I love these. You are so very clever.It can't be easy to do . martyjo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ, JL, martyjo - thank you very much for the read! Glad you enjoyed. I'm sometimes quite amazed at how it comes together and what it says in between the humourous parts. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Helen! That was so much fun. What an amazing thing to do! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful, clever and creative Hope |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I so enjoy when you indulge.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
HopeS - thanks so much for reading and for commenting. Sunshine - When I "indulge" it usually means that I'm in a bad place emotionally but it passes soon enough. Thanks for reading. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
The Lady - Sorry, missed your comment. I've been doing them for so long now that it sort of comes naturally and doesn't take long at all. Thanks! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I love it when you do these -- what an imagination! ...jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love these! You are so very creative...how unique! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
What an ingenius poem! Those titles give it a flavor all it's own. I enjoyed it very much! ~ Klassy |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
vandana, jo, Nancy, and Klassy - Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Helen, you are so full of talent, and oh so clever! Really nice write, Honeybunch~ |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
So cool Honeybunch! :-) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you did a great job on this...thanks for including me~~ M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
YOU ARE ASTOUNDING! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
Interesting, to bad I'm to young at this forum to understand and appreciate it fully, I'll try to catch up Love |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks so much, guys and gals! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
this is amazing.....*smiles* I love it |
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