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Each Night
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Each Night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Each Night Sometimes I know that I can intrude Especially when in that needy of mood. But I think of the times, the moments and walks The stepping over and between of the talks. And I sit by the candlelight warmed by you Unwrapped in the silence, layered by two. When words are beyond the tomorrow's unfold Hand in hand, supported, laced in your hold. Shouldered my want, titled feelings in word Flawed though I am, by degrees to be heard. So I listen each evening with heart and with soul The bonding of timeless,"until" sparks the "whole". And I myst to the reign, for dreams reunite Sorting through all the somedays spilling over this write. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"When words are beyond the tomorrow's unfold Hand in hand, supported, laced in your hold." This was so beautiful, and it flows so nicely and so mellow to read, well done  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"And I myst to the reign, for dreams reunite Sorting through all the somedays spilling over this write." Very nice write! As always!! JL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As per usual, you have "titled feelings in word" ~ and tenderly so.  EA  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you...while searching for a particular poem ( that I could not find for some reason) I read so many of my poems and chose some of my titles to write how I feel today. M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love those last two lines |
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