Open Poetry #37 |
Sharon |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sharon I searched for my words, those of first thoughts, but couldn't find them, wanting to honor you (with last thoughts) before taking them to sleep. They have been silenced in mind, as your voice was in real, with only the whispers of understanding between us. What do you say when another has left this world so unexpectedly, even though... The call, another one putting me on standby, waiting, wondering why I am so civilized at the news. I can't find you, my admiration in words, of someone who battled for years, making my small struggles insignificant. My last visit ending in uncontrollable tears, driving home for hours feeling exhausted from the caring and the caring of... It seems like yesterday, and now... there will be no tomorrow M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a powerful tribute. Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Eric. My sister-in-law passed away yesterday morning. A few years ago after we met, I wrote a poem about the strength she had for having been paralyzed and without a voice for so many years. My brother married Sharon about 7 years ago.(She had a stroke from birth control pills over 20 years ago) I searched for hours last evening and this morning for the poem and couldn't find it. And this was the best I could do for now~~ M |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"I can't find you, my admiration in words, of someone who battled for years, making my small struggles insignificant." Well, I can't find my admiration in words for this poem Touching. Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A tribute of love from a loving heart. Sorry for your loss. My condolences for you and your family. God Bless. Beautiful write. JL |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
My condolances, Maureen. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Seven years is so little time for love...and yet still better than not at all. Lady M. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
M - I am heading out but wanted you to know how touched I was to read this tender tribute to your sister-in-law, will get back to more of a decent comment later. for the entire family. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maureen, I am so very sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful tribute. Sending heart hugs your way. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh dear friend... I am so sorry. *tight hugs* If you need an ear? well, you know. my condolences are such meager words, but know my thoughts are with you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M, I am very sorry to hear of additional loss. Extending my condolences to you and yours. ....jo |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
My condolences Maureen , this was so touching and heartfelt Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you... it all happened so fast and unexpectedly and because of the Easter holiday the funeral plans are for tomorrow and I can't be there. Thank you again, for your warm thoughts. M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Tears and hugs and empathy for you and all who those who were in her life. Only those who have lost one to death can know how it feels, and then we all react to it differently so I am not pretending that I know how you feel exactly, but when I hear of a pipster losing someone, I relive the anguish of my own loss to death and I am hurting along with you, in my small way from across the seas. - Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
My sincere condolences to you too, Maureen. It is always such a sad time in anyone's life and perhaps more sad in this instance because of the circumstances. My best to you. Helen |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I am so sorry for the loss of your sister-in-law. This is a very loving and heart-felt tribute You have written. It touched my heart. Thank you for sharing. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you all, again. For some reason my mind is a blank when trying to find the poem I wrote for Sharon after meeting her and thinking how wonderful she was and I tried all the words that would make the search easier but I still couldn't find it. I couldn't make the funeral in time but was told by my mother how beautiful and at peace she looked. She really was an angel, here on earth. M |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Just read this touching poem. Your voice said it all.So sorry for the loss of one you cared so much for. martyjo |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maureen, I have been struggling to respond to this, as I know what "unexpected timing" is, and how deeply we are hit. So, I've been silently holding you in my thoughts. My heart is with you. Sunshine |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had to get back to your beautiful tribute to your sister-in-law as I know how unexpected death can turn a person's world upside down. The main thing I think we learn from this is to treasure them and every single moment we have ourselves. We learn to let the small "stuff" go, and get on with living life as it is intended, to the fullest. If that is not the purpose of these heartaches I don't know what is. I am so sorry for your family's loss yet again Maureen, and know all to well how time is needed especially with a death over the holidays. Do take care of you and yours. May the miracle of Easter remind you always of your loved one. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Please accept my heartfelt condolences on your loss and I hope her memory will dry your tears and heal your heart...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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