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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2006-04-10 07:09 AM


I walk by old Saint John’s
It’s just the street I am on
The face is shadows.

But the sun’s rising
And the beauty surprising
Its stained glass window

Once upon a time
This was a church very fine,
But in years gone by.

In a brief fire
Worshipping did expire
With whimper and sigh.

The back is now gone
No wood pews left to sit on,
Standing room only

Once more I go in
Cause the door’s been left open,
I go in to see.

In dust I must chough
Christ’s statue has arms broke off,
Stands so serenely.

Asking me from there
His burden to take a share
And be his lost hands.

Then the sun shines down
Colors painted on the ground
Around where I stand.

The window looks different on this side
With light shining on me I can’t hide
Bathed in the light of years of prayer
Accumulated goodness residing there
A breeze blows the clouds around
The dimming brings back city sounds
Echoing off the crumble back wall
The holiness here hasn’t left at all.
Once here it will always reside.

Gloom


© Copyright 2006 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-04-10 10:23 AM


almost missed this one.. nicely done..especially like the last verse.

M

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