Open Poetry #37 |
Shall I............ |
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Spring is around the corner while I linger at it’s threshold As a lonely captive of a dying fireplace that can’t seem to warm me anymore… Shivering… shedding the dampness not trusting the sun yet Spring… only one step away… Should I… Can I… Shall I… |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You should, can and will! Just jealous of all those wonderful tulips coming your way, oh to see that "live!" Lovely poem Neeraja |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Go for it Neeraja! :-) |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
totally agree with Mysteria! Can't wait to get that barefoot feeling again, where the warmth creeps in through the toes... It'll be here soon... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thanks for your sweet comments on my poem! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Didn't look like Spring last night when storms were hauling and rain was pouring and I was sitting in the stable all night waiting for a ewe to lamb, which happened 'round 4.30am this morning and guess what....she got 3!!!. Very nice poem Neeraja, maybe Spring will listen to your words. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Spring shall warm you. I just know it will. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sometimes we think too much, (I know I do) just let spring bloom, and it will. Watch!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is lovely! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"As a lonely captive of a dying fireplace that can’t seem to warm me anymore…" Poignant and beautiful Neeraja. Absolutely! You should! |
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