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i guess it was a little too raw...
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i guess it was a little too raw... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
We wanted each other so bad, We couldn’t do without each other. We always got what we wanted. So we came together, We made it work for us We talked, We laughed, Flirted and we... But it just doesn’t seem right anymore, It doesn’t seem true, i can see it in your eyes, were trying too hard. we had that spark, i guess it ran out too fast. I guess it was a little too raw... Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love should come naturally sad sad poem |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Almost like a blues song idea....good write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure understand this! hopefully it didn't take you ten years to see it like it did me...if it's not right, the sooner you know, the better, I say |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good poem... good responses. Good job! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a sad poem. I can sure understand this too; I have been there. |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou all for taking the time to read my poetry and understanding me. Thankyou. smiles, curiouse i'm looking for you...always... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sad , yet you know when things do seem not right , its when the spark no longer ignites Hope |
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