Open Poetry #37 |
Stop and think |
fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
There comes a time in life When one must stop and think Look around their life And hope they've made their break From the normal every day To doing what they love How boring would it be To realize what you see Is just like everyone else Nothing special nothing new When you take a like At how you life is working out And find that you're not quiet happy With how things turned out Do something different It doesn't have to be big Make a child laugh and smile Or let someone know you care Then sit back and watch As the flower grows in your life For when you give It will, one day, come back. Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
i love it. this poem has so much truth and then i love how you turned it around in the end. thanx, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
such energetic advise, a very positive right/write...thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! So positive and uplifting! |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
I like your message...it seems so clear but yet so distant to so many people! |
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