Open Poetry #37 |
Confused Hills |
pepperdaconvict New Member
since 2006-04-04
Posts 8 |
Anger, Aggression, All of the hatred and depression Progression of these warped thoughts in my head is an obsession The lesson I have learnt from all this drama never will.. amount to a certain feeling, that I get when I spill.. Emotions down on paper, Ever greater when it builds The tension, not to mention, The venture to the hills The deepest valleys over shadow, My little feeble life Confusion everlasting, like bombs blasting at my strife Hands clasping at the knife, With the tightest grip I feel my heart start breaking, with just the slightest rip That's all it takes to verify, the terror deep inside Never let my soul break free, but never let it hide Words release a masterpiece, You'll never understand Although I try to rectify, My world is still un-planned My sense is gone, I will go on, To speak forever true My quest to just invest in faith, and let my feelings through pepperdaconvict |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
My quest to just invest in faith, and let my feelings through'''' You've done just that.... welcome..... And so it those we live with |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Well done, a deluge of promise here. TD |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome aboard, and I just loved your first poem. It reads out a good message ,and to a really great rap beat, at least to my ears. Well done. |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Welcome welcome! Great poem and a nice start. Can't wait to read more. Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Welcome to Passions! Nice Start. Hope there's more where that came from... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wow! Nice start pepper. Welcome. |
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pepperdaconvict New Member
since 2006-04-04
Posts 8 |
I appreciate all who took some time to leave feedback. pepperdaconvict |
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