Open Poetry #37 |
rainbow velveeta |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah is back again with no-doze in his pockets and some java junkie boys from down in tweekerville building a fishin yacht this time seems he went to see his aunt in artica and watched the summer in greenland bare foot got the urges to build again something much faster with fenders for he and the boys to fish from maybe a window seat or two for some veggies and herbs and a view for the afternoons when they watch the sun get swallowed like a ball o fire by a rainbow and there will be a few more than just two worms on this sail maybe some pine grub buckets and a plethora of minnows with the spam cans and velveeta ________________ daark scribblenote: just a what if..the ocean is getting deeper ya know..oh yeah and it is still raining texas here at the beach. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and a view for the afternoons when they watch the sun get swallowed like a ball o fire by a rainbow and there will be a few more ~*~ Don't be stingy...send some our way. We're dusty... with grit and charm |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*stampin my foot* I wanna sea the ocean again, darnnniittt.... Loved this am spot of sun D....thanks for the views through your eyes... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a poem fit for a king, and I bet it even made the ol man smile? Yes? Hugs and good morning... enjoyed very much |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
velveeta and vienna sausages, dipped and used as bait...caught my hunger...so did this....unusal and well written..roll me one up..will ya? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks pipamigos.. you all bless me with your waves..brother toe' would be pleased to hook up some channel cats with ya, thanks |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and there will be a few more than just two worms on this sail maybe some pine grub buckets and a plethora of minnows with the spam cans and velveeta" Yup, love it Stranger. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Fishin the ocean with velveeta could catch you something more than a cold!! Caught a rainbow once myself with it....rainbow trout! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you bring forth many a memory....hugsss you... And so it those we live with |
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