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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-04-04 12:54 PM



   The candle burns bright
We each make use of its light
    While it slowly dies

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-04-04 11:02 AM


Larry~
What a gentle little Senryu to find on this morning light~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-04-04 11:22 AM


Very nicely done..I love this one.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Toerag
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2006-04-04 11:37 AM


"Death" You will know me by my touch...it will be your last"


Love your writing old man....well done...

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