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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-04-03 09:43 PM




heart threads untangle

under a lullaby moon

time awaits weaving


©2006 by icebox

© Copyright 2006 icebox - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-04-03 09:49 PM


and I keep telling you--

it's never goodbye

but au revoir



south china, eh? grumbling

only if YOU are the girl this time

I have missed you...

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-04-03 09:49 PM


this touches softly
icequeen
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3 posted 2006-04-03 09:56 PM


*sigh* It is beautiful. You are so very talented, sir.


Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-04-03 11:52 PM




Exquisite... that's all.


iliana
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5 posted 2006-04-04 02:02 AM


Smiling at Serenity's response....

This is special, Mr. C. *hugs*....jo

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2006-04-04 02:36 AM


Brilliant! "time awaits weaving" - for sure!
Martie
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7 posted 2006-04-04 12:37 PM


icebox

The end is the beginning.  

LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-04-04 01:01 PM


so theres much yet to come, very encouraging write, romantic and pretty...
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