Open Poetry #37 |
JAB TAK HAI JAAN |
curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
this is a song i wrote in urdu but translated it into english for you. except for the title. JAB TAK HAI JAAN (it means as long as thier is life) You are so beautiful He will come to you He will match your bangles He will give you his bhindhi He will dress you with jewels. You will be. Flutter your eyes at me with that mascara. Give me that flirtatious look. We will dance together. Love will never die It is never afraid Love will always stay alive As long as there is life Love will not fade I will not let go of love. you are so beautiful He will come to you He will match your bangles He will give you his bhindhi He will dress you with jewels. You will be. Until then, I will dream of love. [This message has been edited by curiouse (04-04-2006 01:08 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"As the roses grow in my grass As does life surprise me with joy" Excellent. Enjoyed. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write with much feeling |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hi ya gal....do you know (being from England)....what a "Toerag" is?...Paul McCartney of Beatle fame gave me this name....then, I started using it when a dear friend of mine agreed with him, that I was indeed a Toerag...she was from Britain too...how about "Toad in the hole"???? |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
toerag...i'm not sure if i am right.but i think it's something to do with bieng diviouse, not the friendliest name to call someone. i did wonder why you called yourself toerag. toad in the hole is a recipe for a dish. this all seems very wierd. any way, hope that helps, don't mind my song. hugs, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I was told it was a "mischievious rascal"...(British slang)....and toad in the hole is sausage with Yorkshire pudding?...and as far as the name?....Surely it doesn't fit a quiet, wall flower type, shy, innocent guy like me...ya think?...LOL and..your poem is well written and sweet.... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
i think your right about the definitions. and the right name for such a quiet, wall flower type, shy, innocent guy like yourself woild be "charmer".as you do know how to charm someone. thanks for reading my poem. smiles curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
toerag, have you gone off me? |
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