Open Poetry #37 |
Emptying |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
time's changed along with thoughts words have lost their fit another itch coming my way warmth my only comfort, the soft breeze to freshen, exercising my composure waiting... for time use to be on my side But I am drenched in failure and stained with regret and another five years have passed me by "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Never to regret the lessons sent our way...only to revere the learning, and be resilient...Like you M. Heartfelt. TD |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
this aches |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"and another five years have passed me by" Never to pass this way again, and in five more, there will be ten... This is so sad. But life is... as said, as we make it. Me too. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...you know this hit home for me for sure here's to the next five years and the rest of our lives!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD's post was expressed eloquently. You always write from your heart, a quality to be admired. .....jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know this feeling well. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I am drenched in failure and stained with regret" Raw emotion nakdthoughts.. well written. |
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