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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-04-02 09:30 AM




time's changed
along with thoughts
words have lost their fit
another itch coming my way

warmth my only comfort,
the soft breeze to freshen,
exercising my composure
waiting...

for time use to be on my side

But

I am drenched in failure
and stained with regret

and another five years
have passed me by

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-04-02 10:16 AM


Never to regret the lessons sent our way...only to revere the learning, and be resilient...Like you M.
Heartfelt.
TD

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Riding
2 posted 2006-04-02 08:15 PM


this aches
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2006-04-03 10:20 AM


"and another five years
have passed me by"

Never to pass this way again,
and in five more, there will be ten...

This is so sad.  But life is...
as said, as we make it.
Me too.


JL

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-04-03 08:08 PM


oh...you know this hit home for me for sure

here's to the next five years and the rest of our lives!!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
5 posted 2006-04-04 02:32 AM


TD's post was expressed eloquently.  You always write from your heart, a quality to be admired. .....jo
SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2006-04-04 09:57 AM


I know this feeling well.
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
7 posted 2006-04-04 04:44 PM




"I am drenched in failure
and stained with regret"

Raw emotion nakdthoughts.. well written.


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