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Open Poetry #37

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-04-02 06:49 PM

The rain shines
On the road outside

Still leafless
The branches darkly
Vein a somber sky

A small lost dog
Trembling with cold
Scratches at the door

An old love
Not wanting
To be forgotten

The little whimper
Wet with hope

[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (04-02-2006 08:45 PM).]

terasinas
Member

since 2006-03-24

Posts 91
Michigan ... The Great Lakes

1 posted 2006-04-02 06:54 PM

Devine ... What wonderful images

tera

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-04-02 07:09 PM

love it!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-04-02 11:21 PM

I really like this one, John

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2006-04-03 12:06 PM

This is a sad poem to me...
I liked it alot.

-Juju

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2006-04-03 03:10 PM

Thanks everyone.

I am not creative, merely responsive to
and reflective of a given moment,
though something numinous from the past
sometimes glides in.

Thanks again.

John

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-27 03:57 PM

what a day day and what period of life.
somebody sing it out
somebody swollow it in.

poem of indifference.

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