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Open Poetry #37

for her

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-03-17 05:37 PM

over fields
of last night’s snow—

the white house
silent

leafless branches
sway in the cold

no dog in the yard
the picture window darkened

in town
a car or two comes and goes

the storefronts stare
with vacant eyes

like someone
who has been crying
for much too long

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2006-03-17 08:44 PM

stopping in to

*touch the screen*

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

2 posted 2006-03-22 12:47 PM

love your poem love you

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-03-22 02:10 PM

I love it! write on!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-03-22 02:37 PM

Sounds like my home town and my mom's house in the midst of winter. Very vivid.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-03-22 11:26 PM

Nice writing...James

terasinas
Member

since 2006-03-24

Posts 91
Michigan ... The Great Lakes

6 posted 2006-03-30 04:11 AM

I too have thought such ... you put it so nicely though. Amazing how such seemingly insignificant, even meaningless perceptions, can be seen differntly, so that all things hold some meaning ... nice write ... I enjoyed the view, ty

tera

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2006-03-30 05:33 AM

good one...enjoyed

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-04-27 03:51 PM

too calm for a title of "Her".

or sad her.

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