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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-03-17 05:37 PM



over fields
of last night’s snow—

the white house
silent

leafless branches
sway in the cold

no dog in the yard
the picture window darkened

in town
a car or two comes and goes

the storefronts stare
with vacant eyes

like someone
who has been crying
for much too long      



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-03-17 08:44 PM


stopping in to

*touch the screen*

curiouse
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2 posted 2006-03-22 12:47 PM


love your poem love you
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-03-22 02:10 PM


I love it!  write on!

iliana
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4 posted 2006-03-22 02:37 PM


Sounds like my home town and my mom's house in the midst of winter.  Very vivid.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2006-03-22 11:26 PM


Nice writing...James
terasinas
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6 posted 2006-03-30 04:11 AM


I too have thought such ... you put it so nicely though. Amazing how such seemingly insignificant, even meaningless perceptions, can be seen differntly, so that all things hold some meaning ... nice write ... I enjoyed the view, ty

tera

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7 posted 2006-03-30 05:33 AM


good one...enjoyed
Drauntz
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8 posted 2007-04-27 03:51 PM


too calm for a title of "Her".

or sad her.

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