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Seamless (Inspired)
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Seamless (Inspired) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Seamless, or was it? The thought that washed the shore of my mind, back and forth, ebbing slowly into the pool of desire. A place of mist and whispers, of questions unanswered and hauntingly meaningless answers that puzzled and perplexed, pondered and pacified. Might the walk reveal that which cloaks the heart’s desires? Where gravel crunches crush the sand that washes slowly back into time, where all is naught and naught is all....where the crystal meets the ankle at the cherished ball....and, in spite of the cloak, the band plays lingering on, on into the night, where mists and whispers prevail...and an unraised toast dribbles upon the floor. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wheewww Heewww! Now, that's what I'm talkin' 'bout! Beautiful piece Mag. Enjoyed. TD |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus A delightful write, enjoyed the read. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Maestro, you make the world go away this morning as you spin soft words into music and mirrors, sweet nothing, and all. mmmmm! ~ Karen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry "Seamless, or was it? The thought that washed the shore of my mind, back and forth, ebbing slowly into the pool of desire." Yes, it is seamless!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
" Where gravel crunches crush the sand that washes slowly back into time, where all is naught and naught is all....where the crystal meets the ankle at the cherished ball....and, in spite of the cloak, the band plays lingering on, on into the night, where mists and whispers prevail...and an unraised toast dribbles upon the floor" Barry this is one of the most beautiful passages I have read in a long long while!! Seamless indeed!!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The thought that washed the shore of my mind, back and forth, ebbing slowly into the pool of desire." ~ Uniquely and poetically expressed ~ and I cannot help but wonder how your were "inspired".  Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so good to read your words and heart again |
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