Open Poetry #37 |
Predilection Purple |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Predilection Purple Predilection purple of April rain Makes more hospitable an easy chair evening Green tea steaming; frothy bubble foot soaks My reading light set soft, my heart to listen Thin, the whispering of your name echoes surely Made pale in the wrapping of down, close and far Mouthing futile incantations to smile absurdly That I might transcend this longing for now We are friends, uniquely and reverently Humble as love blossoms forth just the same Perpetual bloom, and I fan my eyes at the moon Questioning your silent times as hidden doubt It is not you I doubt…but truth Evasive sends the innumerable quiet to smother fear Reading my emotions through closed eyes Touching there upon your sleeve a question Might we be the deeper dream in repertoire? Kept separate from the usual fare In these moments sated in the damp of trust My reading light set soft, my heart to listen Copyright Kkh 3/31/06 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Trust was the word that caught me ....and made the poem whole! As all your poems are so very beautiful! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"We are friends, uniquely and reverently Humble as love blossoms" These words stopped me in my tracks. Wow! Love your description here! misc'e |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"In these moments sated in the damp of trust My reading light set soft, my heart to listen" Oh yes. I love the whole poem but the ending is wonderful. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Might we be the deeper dream in repertoire? Kept separate from the usual fare In these moments sated in the damp of trust My reading light set soft, my heart to listen" Enticing write. Left me wanting to hear more. And more. JL |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
These were my favourite lines in this well crafted poem! "We are friends, uniquely and reverently Humble as love blossoms forth just the same Perpetual bloom, and I fan my eyes at the moon Questioning your silent times as hidden doubt" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such love and hope expressed so delicately in words that are but a puzzle waiting to be laced delicately together. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
TD, I love the color purple so I knew I'd love this poem! |
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