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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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Pictures irrelevant cascading through my eyes each person lifelessly living in frozen motions of memory did we not meet under the stars in Savannah with white trees of moss laughing houses posing old smiles carefully caressing the time of day; with slow walks in the squares notions of young, peering into the history of the south breath, unsteady clinging to damp air we giggled eating ice cream melting into our hands did we? ahhhhh..... the sensual nights with warm carriage rides lighting bugs and magnolias entertaining the wind did we not love? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"did we not meet under the stars in Savannah with white trees of moss laughing houses posing old smiles carefully caressing the time of day" Oh Page, you romantic you. This is absolutely lovely.  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you... this was a test I have never be able to write romantically I am thrilled it came across that way! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
I can't believe you ever thought you couldn't! this was just lovely!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You're a natural at it.. you envoke emotion with the way you put your words together.. and this one is being saved.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you both agin for your praise!!! |
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