Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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2006-03-31
08:07 PM
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Have faith in empty things.
Trace my outline to the night as I slowly turn away.
I am not absent to your fingers.
As a void presses constant against all that seeks to hold...
I am endless in your touch.
Even as the night brings empty things.
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Eric P McCarty
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ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
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2006-03-31
08:26 PM
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So good to read you again Eric. Stunning write. TD
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Martie
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California
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2006-03-31
08:27 PM
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ericc
I'm glad to see a poem from you...this one, as all of yours, is very thougtfilled. "The Faith of Empty Things"....Just the title is poetry. And, I agree!
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2006-03-31
08:36 PM
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Eric, you have been missed! Very much enjoyed this piece...as I do all your work. Hugs~Nancy~ Trace my body with your words, in doing so, you touch my heart ~
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exhale
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2006-04-01
01:36 AM
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I am endless in your touch.
Even as the night brings empty things.
perfect ending. Great, great write.
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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
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2006-04-01
02:21 AM
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I have certainly missed your words of wisdom and this write is no less wise - wonderfully wise! Regards Helen
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Neeraja
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The Netherlands
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2006-04-01
02:26 AM
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Beautiful!!!
"I am endless in your touch"
Great line Ericc!!!
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icebox
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in the shadows
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2006-04-01
02:33 AM
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Brilliant!
Even with flashing spokes the wheel of life revolves around a void.
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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
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2006-04-01
10:47 AM
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You capture it in iron Eric
Dave
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passing shadows
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2006-04-01
03:23 PM
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a soft and comforting piece here, deeply felt, in my own way. I have so missed reading you!
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miscellanea
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2006-04-01
03:51 PM
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Again, I don't know how you do this. So few words evoke such feeling in me. Thank you for sharing so eloquently.
miscellanea
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terasinas
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2006-04-01
08:33 PM
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Form from Emptiness, Emptiness in Form ... Enjoyed your words Ericc. Do we grasp at emptiness when we grasp at each other? Still, it is comforting to know this apparent form is not alone, lol.
Paradoxically the Void longs to be filled and Form longs to find the Void ... Emptiness
tera
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
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2006-04-01
08:40 PM
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Eric! You're baaack! I hope that you stay awhile!
"I am endless in your touch."
~ There is always at least one line in a poem of yours that is very memorable for me!
Good to read you again! Linda
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garysgirl
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2006-04-01
08:43 PM
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"The Faith Of Empty Things"
Eric, I agree with Martie.....even your title is poetic. Love the thoughts you wrote this one from.
Good to see you!! Hugs, Ethel
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