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Open Poetry #37

We Want To Just........BE

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2006-03-31 11:25 AM

~We Want To Just........BE~

~~**~~
As I lie down to sleep this night
I think of you holding me tight
In your arms that feel so strong
Making me feel there is no wrong

With space between we are apart
Apart in body but not in heart
You are lonesome for me as I am for you
I know you are for our love is true

Our touch so gentle we do miss
The brush of our lips in a kiss
Whispers of love into our ear
Our pleasures together when we are near

One day soon we hope and pray
Together will be forever and a day
Close by each other never to part
The rest of our lives then we will start

Though together are our pleasures galore
The love between us consist of much more
Desperately wanting each other to see
So that together you and I can just.....BE
~~**~~

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-03-31 11:34 AM

Beautiful!!

JL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-03-31 04:09 PM

Ethel, this is a lovely poem...heartfelt and so full of warmth

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2006-03-31 04:44 PM

Beautiful touch of heartfelt poetry.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2006-03-31 08:05 PM

Beautiful.

Eric

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-03-31 08:34 PM

Exquisite dear Ethel...
yes..just to Be

Love ya lady~
Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-03-31 08:35 PM

Ethel..It's so good to see love like this!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2006-04-01 08:28 PM

Thank you all for reading and replying.

I appreciate you all.
Hugs,
Ethel

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