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Three Oaks |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Again Now cautiously The calendar approaches The day you were born A smooth stone In the lawn Surrounded by flowers Cool with a tint of blue Under the shadows Of a nearby tree You would hope by now Even the unconsciousness With practiced indifference Would pass without comment Too busy to notice or pause And yet that stillness Begins to fill the evening hours Dawn comes with mists Mysteriously lingering As if looking for someone Who isn’t there |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I envy your ability to write of that connection to that place of wordless bliss. Much enjoyed this John. You should bottle this stuff.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome!! It's the only word I can think of...love that ending too! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and beautiful again. |
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