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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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In dim gray light The ridges and valleys In sheets disclosed Portraits on the walls Open their eyes On shoes and clothes Strewn randomly Across the floor You lie still asleep A breast rising and falling Gently as you breathe Life into this love we share In dreams a part Of who we are |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW! This is beyond fantastic! A total keeper  |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
this poem is wonderfully intimate and deep it's a great read and believe me it is beyond fantastic. oh i'm curiose about where you got your name from "haun yi" because there are a lot of backgrounds or just imagination that it could be from |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you both Curiouse, Huan Yi was a 14th Century Chinese musician who created "Three Variations on a Theme of Plum Blossoms" of which I have through CD purchases several performances. Again Thanks John |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thanx for that it thought it had somthing to do with chinese any way i love your poetry and hope to read more love me xxx |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I feel I've peeked and seen something not for my eyes... but can't regret the knowing. *S* Lovely!!! |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
... Lovely tera |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definite keeper! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
everything is going to wake now. spring, spring, spring! beautiful |
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