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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-30 07:02 AM

Land of Between

Maybe the words were real
or maybe they were just "write".
Maybe inside the doubts bought seeds
to bring me into the light.

Maybe my rhyme's worth nothing
and maybe it's treasures' hold.
Just maybe I'm wasting the glimpse of my best
tracing these feelings in bold.

Maybe my heart is deceptive,
playing a game deep within.
Read what you read, traveling the lines
'cause sometimes I think I'm a twin...

For emotions take twists and those turns
imbibing what may/may not be.
Clouds hover over wanting to rain
but fade into blueness, you see.

Or maybe you don't, there's the rub,
disclosing my feelings held back.
I live for the now in the Land of Between
with no reason, just feeling the lack.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2006-03-30 08:28 AM

Little Mo darling one, there's no maybe about it YOU are gifted, and this is a gift of pure poetic dream. Thank you muchly for the breath of you flowing into the mind of me. Love the form and the content you are an amazingly intuative person, and this is sheer inspiration
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x
see there's another splash of pink for your think. Take care darling one, always for you are a child of the moon, and I still recall the silver shadows that danced in your words and still do

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

2 posted 2006-03-30 11:26 AM

Maureen...Deep thoughts within this poem. Enjoyed very much.All we can do is follow our dreams and heart...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2006-03-30 01:00 PM

I like you in bold.

And if you play a hand of poker out, and call your opponent on the bluff--those cards get laid out on the table.

I have lost a few hands, just for the sake of curiousity.

Love ya lady

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

4 posted 2006-03-30 05:18 PM

Maureen, this is wonderful. I have been 'between' myself many times.

It's not such an uncomfortable place.
Huggles, Marti

Every blade of grass has its angel
that bends over it and whispers,
"grow, grow."

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2006-03-30 05:50 PM

A fine write M thank you..

Goldenrose.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2006-03-30 06:31 PM

“I live for the now in the Land of Between
with no reason, just feeling the lack.”

Yin and Yang.
But there is no lack in your ability to express with words of delight.
Good one!

JL

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2006-03-31 01:31 AM

Understanding the twin as I am a Gemmie, too, as you know. Very good write, M.....jo

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2006-03-31 04:04 AM

Wonderfully expressed Maureen , I am also familiar with the land of between

Hope

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2006-03-31 04:12 AM

good write here M
you described this nicely

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