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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-03-26 09:26 PM





Grimm’s Protégé

Slow understanding,
Surprised at means that could have been ~
Ignorant, one sleeps;
Fantasizing diverse scope
Still alive in love of hope.


" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-03-26 09:44 PM


Hope...I wish more people shared that thought.  Some people will never understand it or feel it...it breaks my heart.  

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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2 posted 2006-03-26 10:14 PM


A soft hopeful write, Karilea
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3 posted 2006-03-26 10:17 PM


Bravo!

(Clapping here)

Bubbles

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4 posted 2006-03-26 10:24 PM


Much enjoyed this verse, and the accompanying photo...which is perfect, I might add.  *hugs*.....jo
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5 posted 2006-03-27 03:38 PM


Short and sweet.
Excellent write!

JL

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6 posted 2006-03-27 04:14 PM


hope of love reversed
a dormant understanding
hope of love renewed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

kayjay
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7 posted 2006-03-27 07:23 PM


To hope is to love
To love is to be at peace
To have peace is hope.

Incredible photo!  Very nice piece of writing.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Martie
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8 posted 2006-03-27 09:10 PM


Sissie

"Slow understanding,
Surprised at means that could have been ~"

Understanding sometimes takes time, sometimes it helps to sleep on it.  "Love of hope"...now that is something everyone could use more of.  

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9 posted 2006-03-27 09:16 PM


smiling here
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10 posted 2006-03-27 10:08 PM


for what it's worth, i must have some of that slow understanding... 'cause I'm just not getting it!  

edit: apparently,on top of being slow to understand, I also can't spell with a durn!

[This message has been edited by Christopher (03-27-2006 11:01 PM).]

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11 posted 2006-03-28 07:55 AM


I didn't even know Grimm had a Mazda?....How ya been gal?
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