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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-03-23 11:31 AM



If all distills
To such shades of blue
Then in the end there will be no fear

And I would happily go into sky and sea
Beyond being the smallest memory

For what more than blue
Is worthy after all

Sunrise
On Spring Harbor



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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
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england
1 posted 2006-03-23 11:44 AM


my bithday is in april so great choice of name and great poem to go with it
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2 posted 2006-03-28 03:43 PM


Blue...I would want that too...blue has been the color I've somehow come to associate with the best things life has brought me...to have all colors dissolve into a soft blue, yes, that would be just fine.

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terasinas
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since 2006-03-24
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3 posted 2006-03-29 04:30 AM


Very nice! So simple, so few words, yet jsut right. I enjoy your expressive written forms

tera

Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-04-27 03:29 PM


blue dream. or this blue is not that blue.
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