Open Poetry #37 |
Little Calumet |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
A river flows Slowly deeply Under an iron bridge The muddy colored water Swirls in circles Among green lily pads Under the shadows Of summer leaves On the slope of a hill near the shore A wooden house in disrepair Its siding gray with age Once upon a time Many years ago There was a beautiful girl |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
Awww Huan .. I loved this ... I grew up in Northern Mich and lived in a town called Calumet. Before that, it was Copper City, not far away ... and it was there I used to visit a pond very much like the one you described .. ty for the memories .. nice ones .. beautiful writing .. please keep sharing. I appreciate your writing very much. Thank you tera |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
simply beautiful. |
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