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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Through the silence I pretend... I smile and make up reasons busy myself.....with life I do fine enough I have a strong heart you know.. until I close my eyes find you there, in my dreaming it leaves me undone ....that missing you ache.... I’m always gonna love you and no matter how romantic the notion even I know I’m pathetic... ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (03-21-2006 10:16 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well, you might settle for that self-analysis. But I prefer to call it a broken heart. Been there and time is a really good thing. Yup'am I love you from any angle.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Not pathetic at all. Beautiful write JL  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well if I was that puppy I would be lickin you right on the mouth kewl stuff ms |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling Susan.. You described it well. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well, SEA, I don't think you're pathetic...to be able to write like this. I do feel the longing and what Larry says is true. ....jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"until I close my eyes find you there, in my dreaming" No, not Pathos; awareness. This is an excellent write. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There is nothing....nothing at all pathetic about love....and especially not when it is expressed so humbly. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was beautiful!!! never ever sell yourself short, your a beautiful lady, with such enormous talent...  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Some things we just know are "gonna be forever" and knowing is never pathetic! Enjoyed your write! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much for your kind replies...  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
lemme SEA now ... you being pathetic is akin to the Pacific sunset being nice to look at. you beng pathetic is like calling the ceiling of the Sistine Chapel competent artwork. you being pathetic is IMPOSSIBLE!!!!!!!! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your pen is as beautiful as you yourself are, dear Noble One. May you appreciate yourself as your readers appreciate you! Hugs with love, Linda |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Pathetic? Maybe just undying love... In any case, this poem certainly isn't pathetic... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think when you truly love someone...you will always love them... I like your sentiments, SEA M |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I found your words almost embarressing..like you were embarrssed to speak them...and yet the words fit your feeling perfectly..you honestly said what was in your heart..and that came across...but it sounded almost like you didnt believe your own words...that ''something'' else wrote the words..and you would be right..it was your heart speaking..you cannot hide from your heart...and on this evidence it is something to be treasured..thank you for the words Sea.. Goldenrose. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I've found myself pathetic a few times...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww...you guys are too nice.. Interloper  Goldenrose, that was so nice, thank you and James you made me laugh, that was good... thank you very much for your replies |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, You are anything but pathetic my friend. You are a hopeless romantic, and not a thing wrong with that! Very good to read you. Write if you get a chance. Take care & hugs, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lady, you sure know how to find the best pictures to scream those amazing words! This was anything but pathetic! Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~hugs~  sweetieand your not pathetic Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
even the Sea burns when flying too close to the flame... not pathetic though -- pathetic is the infatuated person who can't stop talking about how wonderful 'he' is every third minute... this, this is the sweetness of life -- and the bitterness of loss -- we are all pathetic -- we are all magnificent and you are glorious!  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you, each of you...so much and Reb? thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate to this, but pathetic? No. We are just softies |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Very sorrowful, yet I can see that while longing is inevitable it is also comforting to the soul. Once agian inspiring ICE, I missed feeling through your art. EAB |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
quote: Oh I know the feeling....and I know the pathetic part too....the best part is, as Larry said, time's a great healer/ ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, anything you write is beautiful, just as love is beautiful. But, I do know this feeling of thinking of how deep a love is and possibly not ever being able to know fully the potential of that love. I know how deep that hurts. Hugs, Ethel |
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starinthedark Junior Member
since 2006-02-13
Posts 32 |
Wow can I relate to this...very nice and ty starinthedark * hugs to you |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Susan~ This was difficult to read only because I relate so deeply. I, too know the longing, the wondering, the dissection of 'what could have been' all too well ~ you penned this exquisitely and painfully. It truly is one of your best, and if you don't mind, I'm going to save this in my library, keep it to myself and dedicate it to David..Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I am not sure about being "pathetic..." Even if it might feel that way I just get reminded of this of my own, if you will allow me to share my words here 5230 Made to Think 29 March 2006 We ask ourselves the same questions The ones we want to know Were we born does to each day Another part of us forward grow What of the departed Those ones we truly loved A mother's child - a brother lost the baby we never knew Was this love could it be true “I know that thou canst do every thing, and that no thought can be withholden from thee.” Job 42: 2 KJV © 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet) a poet who cares |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all for your very kind replies it means a lot to me |
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