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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Lay me down there where your soul’s shadow clouds, concealing emotions felt unrevealing depth of your intensity lay me down for just a moment in the love you used to feel for me let me touch what used to be if only for just a moment drown me, allow me this memory saturate my senses with all the words you chose to never say permeate my perception so I can finally understand why you went away then bury my heart at least the broken part that once held everything I held onto the part that was my faith, my love for you ~SEA~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh Gawd!  This one hit me hard today. Only our SEA can write like this. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...this sure tugs at the heart strings! Such a beautiful ache Susan. Excellent write!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Susan, 'Sea' is such an appropriate pen name for you. The depth of emotion always moving in your writing. Sadness here and loss beautifully penned. But the thing I like about the sea is that it is as everlasting ast new dawns and sunsets, and a constanst source of new life. ~ Hugs Klssy |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brother! You could at least give a warning?  |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
I like to think we never really lose anyone, and now I have a part of you ... J |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sorry I got interrupted, and I meant to say there is no one that can write out a sea of tears that will drown ya like you Sea  Loverly m'friend. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh my. Heartbreaking and perfect. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
beautiful words Sue, good to sea you around again. |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
SEA, Great photo and words, bitter sweet, of a want of use to be's, tearfully! Great flow. thanks for sharing, picturegramic |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, now this IS a beautiful heartache write and yet, also quite soothing few can do what you just did the SEA really ebbs gracefully from your pen |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, I totally understand the emotions here in this beautiful poem. Someday when you have a chance, check out my "Pirate" poem somewhere in archives, I think you'll identify. *hugs*....jo |
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Pauline Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28Island in the Sun... |
Beautiful..says it all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so wonderful to read you again a touching piece |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
nicely done. poignant, at the least, common ground at the best. i like it (though i'd hate to see you drowned ) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful heart write...touching me!  |
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Astrogirl18 Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 16Canada |
I really felt that  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This one puts nails to poetry, it feels down to its core. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all SO MUCH for your kind words. Klassy, thank you that was so nice... and Kissy?  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so so beautiful...my oh my, it has been such a long time since I read you...so happy to have found this...you've taken me to the sea...my one and only love... hugs |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Sea, it's been a while since I caught up on messages. "Kissy" should have been "Klassy." Looking at that comment, I was probably tired when I posted--it is full of typos! LOL Hugs, K. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
saturate my senses with all the words you chose to never say That is what makes it hard to make a comment on a poem like this. As if being afraid in what to say or how to say it a poet who cares |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Klassy, actually, I refer to our poet/moderator Christopher as "Kissy" as in "Kissy Face" sorry about the confusion. and to my New Zealand Christopher...that's ok if you don't know what to say, what ever you want to say is best... and if that is nothing, that's ok too. |
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