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Open Poetry #37

Focusing On A Sunshine

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2006-03-18 07:26 PM

Let the darkness fade,
My heart opens,
As I focus on this sunshine,
To my eyes,

Iam finding a path,
To this light,
Let the darkness fades away,
Till the morning light,

I find the sun so bright,
Upon my face,
Where I search a place,
On this opened heart,

The darkness will be still there,
Still I willl be strong
Never get wrong,
On this focusing on this sunshine,

When we see a ray of sun,
Through our eyes,
We focus on this sunshine,
The bright light,
Through my eyes,

Still.....

On focusing on a sunshine.......

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-03-18 08:03 PM

Vandana, I hope you know that I'm pleased
to be one of the first to respond to this.

Your poetry has grown so well over the years;
and while I know this wasn't meant for me,
still, I'm pleased to see how you wish to
follow "a" light.

Well done, good poet.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-03-19 10:44 PM

Excellent job... gentle and delicate.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2006-03-19 10:45 PM

Nice...James

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-03-19 11:44 PM

vandana

I love the sunshine...both the one in the sky and our own poet. You wrote this well!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2006-03-20 12:36 PM

Enjoyed this write and actually when one thinks about it, life is all about what we focus on. The sun, the light of life, may your focus always bring you peace and happiness.

Helen

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