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amepoesie
Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 63
Canada

0 posted 2006-03-17 09:50 PM

Specks of light and tears of wonder.
Soft hearts that fear no one’s squalor.
Listen to the chant of the souls
Who’ve crafted Love, Hope, our sweet poles.

Bloody crosses and dust to dust.
Undying bones and wanderlust.
Witness the return of the minds
Who’ve designed Life for their own kinds.

Never forgotten, their pyre is God’s design.
Never put behind, their crown of thorns, crystalline,
Sparkle in the dark. Then, man’s flaws evaporate.
Their castles have opened walls. Nobody’s stalemate.

Praise be to builders of kingdoms in the air!
Hail the victors whose magnum opus lies in visions!

Fiat lux and gloriousness.
Disjecta membra and noblesse.
You can be their counterpart too.
Here lies the rightful virtue.

Cendrine Marrouat
http://soulpoetry.eponym.com/

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

1 posted 2006-03-17 10:53 PM

To be honest, I am not sure what this poem is about - maybe you could enlighten me a little, but I really liked the flow and the words. I may not understand them, but I really was drawn into your poem. It is a good one so maybe you could explain it to this lost mind. lol.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
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amepoesie
Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 63
Canada

2 posted 2006-03-17 10:58 PM

Ok,
No problem to explain the poem.
I wanted to write about those great souls that made the world and history possible, not through wars and invasions, but through love and compassion, like Jesus Christ for example.
The trick is that anyone can be like them if they really want to.
Is it a little clearer for you?

Cendrine Marrouat
http://soulpoetry.eponym.com/

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2006-03-17 11:21 PM

"Praise be to builders of kingdoms in the air!
Hail the victors whose magnum opus lies in visions!"

I agree 100%! Powerful write.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

amepoesie
Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 63
Canada

4 posted 2006-03-18 02:33 AM

Thanks!

Cendrine Marrouat
http://soulpoetry.eponym.com/

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