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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-12 09:10 AM

The sadness that sweeps
seems more permanent today
maybe because the walls are now down
and the shield has been put aside
and the body can feel the breezes
warm and cold, that change as they stretch
their days above.

There is no matter in mattering,
been said before, and now once again
leaving the wondering to wonder
when all those ifs had been dismissed
and just the living taking place.

Never expecting the one or any to understand,
not even the one of long standing
for I sit now, disillusioned
emptying the feel of my makeup
wanting to try on something new...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-03-12 09:40 AM

There is a change here..it is on the wind..enjoyed the emptyness of this..of the want and what if's ..dont i myself go through this all the time?..thank you..M.

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

2 posted 2006-03-12 10:57 AM

A beatiful poem nakedthoughts. It puts me in mind of a line from some old song I can't nail down. But the line say's "Theres got to be, more to love than this." :-) Maybe there is!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2006-03-12 12:08 PM

Well M..why doncha? Try something a smidge
on the different side... None the less,
the pen flows well, as you so adeptly do.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2006-03-14 04:41 PM

"Never expecting the one or any to understand,
not even the one of long standing
for I sit now, disillusioned
emptying the feel of my makeup
wanting to try on something new..."

I completly understand, except for the makeup part of course

but i know what it is like to have the utter feeling that no one will understand you, even the person you just spent years of you life with...

A change is going to come...

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

5 posted 2006-03-14 06:59 PM

indeed everyone needs someone to understand them at some point

Seek thee out thr terror moon, seek thee out the chaos fire, seek thee out the Havyk

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2006-03-18 06:36 AM

was just a bad week of school wondering if this is what I wish to continue to do...

thank you for your caring responses

M

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