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"Of Moose and Men"
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"Of Moose and Men" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I've heard it said of Moose and Men, as Moose we should be proud. For, where most men have lost their heads, ours tower 'bove the crowds. Quite often we will just observe the foolish ways of man, who can't tell a fedora from his backside with both hands! Appearing very awkward, Man, adopts his normal stance, pontificating loudly ( though it's muffled by his pants). Expounding on all subjects, quite convinced that he is right, (A remarkable achievement when ones' head's no where in sight!) As Moose, we calmly witness this, and share a knowing grin. We've long known why the caged bird sings, and what fools locked them in. Amusing ourselves greatly watching your heads dissappear, their exact locations noted by the clues that we've left here. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"Appearing very awkward, Man, adopts his normal stance, pontificating loudly ( though it's muffled by his pants). Expounding on all subjects, quite convinced that he is right, (A remarkable achievement when ones' head's no where in sight!)" Indeed....If I don't know what I'm talking about...I'll just shout Nice write, Moose |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
wranx, thanx, at fisrt I was all about saying something witty. So much for that. Enjoy your stuff when I get a chance to read. Doc |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There's a bit of wit there  M |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I like the way it flows, It sounds much like a conversation to me while you maintian rhythem and rhyme. Very good write, I can use this to make my own writes better. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very clever, funny and wise. John Steinbeck would love it too! - Owl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You delight me, yanno that? smiling here clever and witty, as always, you  |
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