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Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
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0 posted 2006-04-09 02:25 PM



lost
found only in memory
a face so familiar
we met along side of the dirt road
drank coffee in Italy
climbed mountains
in Washington
laughed brutally with each other
never understanding distance
until
it was too late

you are lost
fading quickly
a face dimly lit by memories
blurred with time
we were young
dancing in the rain
but the color of your sweater has
escaped
me
was it red
or pink
its too late

lost
forgotten
memory falling with each new day
your last name
has left me
jumbled together with other words
I've learned
or people I have met
we used to talk
for hours on corded telephones
connected by three-way calling
incoherently understanding

its too late
you're lost

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-04-09 02:31 PM




"but the color of your sweater has
escaped
me
was it red
or pink
its too late"

This poem seems vaguely forlorn
Page. Funny how little things
like the color of a sweater
can mean so much. Nice work.


Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
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2 posted 2006-04-09 02:35 PM


Yes it is funny. You think you will remember everything about that person but pictures fade...
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-04-09 06:16 PM


time and memories are strange that way

I've forgotten so many people's names and faces now and it's just amazing to me when I thought I'd remember them always

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

4 posted 2006-04-09 10:16 PM


Passing I know how you feel....
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