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The Whirlwind
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The Whirlwind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Whirlwind The whirlwind left me high and dry The valley of a muted sigh Where silver moonlight fell like snow And shadows weaved a dance of woe Where phantoms roved in wayward seek A path of wasted time and bleak To find a spirits afterglow That once had lived in sunshine flow A journey back into the past A journey of a mental cast A search into the apple core To find once more the gardens door But cobwebs slowed the go to naught No matter how the phantom fought And time and space has closed the grid Beyond his prayer of God forbid This whisper flows throughout the earth A whirlwind that affects all birth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternnonn, Sir Sonneteer! I know what you mean about those ding dang whirlwinds! They can whisk you away from La La Land to Blah Blah Land in the blink of an eye! Here is some happy sunshine for you!   EA  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I ate that apple to the core and found the seeds of evermore... Sy, your right...so so true well done |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Where silver moonlight fell like snow And shadows weaved a dance of woe" You draw whirlwinds so well sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I delight in your comments. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are a blessing. LeeJ Thank you sweety.  |
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