Open Poetry #37 |
The Wake of Heather |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Wake of Heather A knee of lilac heather rose Above the blankets mist impose Into a sky of feather blue To help the mornings touch of you With rainbow path from end to end Above the valleys gentle bend Where dew drops catching shafts of light Make for me an awesome sight Each coming of the early dawn Comes in beauty every morn With light that whispers like a sigh And makes for magic in my eye It bests the very best of dream This awesome every morning scheme To wake me with a gentle glove This gentle hand from up above It is what I will miss the most This gift from a most gracious host |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
mmmmmm... the smell of your lilacs bring spring instantly to my winter I enjoyed reading your poetry! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And so, approaches Spring, Heather's mother... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Air Goddess, Thank you my dear. Sunshine Did I tell you I love you this morning? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"A knee of lilac heather rose Above the blankets mist impose Into a sky of feather blue To help the mornings touch of you" Soft and lovely. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
*sigh* Beautifully elegant, Mr. T. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Caroline, High praise for a second rate poet. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Each coming of the early dawn Comes in beauty every morn With light that whispers like a sigh And makes for magic in my eye Your poems do the same, my friend. *S* This is absolutely beautiful! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. And it takes beauty to see beauty. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...I feel similarly about the morning. Thanks for reminding me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie To some you are the morning. |
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