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You Will Always Be Spring To Me
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You Will Always Be Spring To Me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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You Will Always Be Spring To Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ Amid the rays of a blistered sun your memories came thundering in Scorching the meadow of my heart with desire for just a yesterday when all our dreams were verdure with new blossoming of Spring in surrender to the warming of love My heart in fond remember of you returns to play in the meadow of treasured days of smiling recall when I was yours .. and you mine Love is foreverly .. in my heart You will always be Spring to me~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was not only beautifully worded, Marge, but I found the fact that it appears to be in the form of a perfect square, quite meaningful -- kind of representative of perfection.  ...jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh dear Marge~ this is so heartfelt, a perfectly beautiful write, pertfect in content, flow and as Jo said....in the form of a perfect square. tender write my friend ~hugs~  Tracie P.S you don't suffer from OCD do you?  Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is really lovely, and so beautifully true. Love really is utter perfection. And I love this utterly I'm feeling a little better at the moment, went for some treatment Thursday, but unfortunately for me it didn't go as expected. Oh well better luck next time. But truly I do feel a little better, and reading this beauty certainly helped. as always Mushy x x x x  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely, Marge! Good to know that such love exists, though sad that the two of you are no longer together. Tracie, what is OCD? - Owl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful dear Marge!! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A write like this brings me joy, to see love. Beautiful, Marge. I didn't notice the square until iliana mentioned it. Nifty presentation. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, m'dear, YOU are foreverly spring! ~ and who could help but love you foreverly. So lovely...so loving, EO |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Thank God for sweet memories to soothe the pain of separation. I really like the 'meadow of your heart' and of treasured days. Supurb! Rae |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: What a poignant and lovely write. Only you would think of presenting it in a perfect "square"! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely, lovely...loverly!  hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis I know you will always find the springtime of love within your heart. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a lovely way to find springtime. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Marge..I love it... and you my dear, "will always be spring to me" as well... thanks for a lovely read chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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