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Wintry Kinda Guy
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Wintry Kinda Guy |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
Wintry Kinda Guy In my small smelly apartment I wait High heels stamp building’s staircase A reminder, rainy day Clouds dehydrate moist fumes, Don’t want this season to end with a cry I admit , I am wintry kinda guy I am wintry kinda guy She says everything has a meaning But I disagree with her, Celebrate the rain but warmth won’t halo you I measure your insignificant point of views But I can’t get through, no centimeters ahead In my holy holed room I sit Everybody’s tip - I should quit A reminder, I’m sad again Calmness has never been good to me my lord She is pure evil, even when I go away Without you, just live until I die Because everybody knows I am wintry kinda guy I am wintry kinda guy It’s snowing again, I take lumpy white balls I linger, then I throw it on my voodoo dolls It pains me to see me suffering like that But it doesn’t make sense at all She nearly hates me She nearly loves me She almost despises me She almost, always, lies to me When we were children everything was so simple We were allowed to be rude I gave her a kiss, I mostly lonely stood, Craving for her uncommon bliss We slid, we took her greenish tricky sleigh I told her secretly, I am Wintry kinda guy Since then, I always held up my drippy rainy cry Since then, I forfeited every love that smoothly came by |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Great write... When we were children everything was so simple We were allowed to be rude I gave her a kiss, I mostly lonely stood, This is a poem that really stands out |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"When we were children everything was so simple" ~ Oh, 'tis true, 'tis true... Dear Wintry Kinda Guy, I hope the sun in the spring will warm you and smile your heart happy.  EA |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
Thank you guys !!! I am so happy you liked my poem ! Thank you ! Truly yours, DanniArtist |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nicely done! |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
Midnitesun, Thank you !! Truly yours, DanniArtist |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
very lovely, I love the way you set up the mood. -Juju |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh my yes! "She nearly hates me She nearly loves me She almost despises me She almost, always, lies to me" Great! |
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