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Close your eyes and follow me
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Close your eyes and follow me |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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Close your eyes and follow me I'll show you worlds you won't believe. I'll give you wings and take you far We'll cross the moon and chase a star. Close your eyes and listen close It's the words I speak that mean the most. I'll make you feel your passions true I'll make you see this world all new. Just close your eyes and drift along on my river of words on my stream of song. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And a wonderful song you sing Christopher. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chris, as graceful as a lullaby... |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Very good rhyme, meter, and stanza structure here, Chris. Enjoyed. CB 8) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CMGrimm I often think like that. Enjoyed the read. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Enjoyed  thanks for the read and then He created the horse... |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Nice poem, I enjoyed it, especially the end. And I can't help but see a similarity in our names. Brother? Just kidding. Cheers - Ed |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Written so well and touched a place in my heart. Cheers, Fee |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing!! Hugs, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Traveling through your poem was like traveling through a song -- much enjoyed the flow.  ...jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! breathtakingly beautiful, loved the imagery and the graceful flow of your splendid write...well done! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is lovely, made me smile and a much needed one too. Thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CMG ~ What woman could refuse such a dreamy offer!?! Delightfully sweet and romantic! EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Okay, Cutie Pie~ Got MY eyes closed ...  And singing~  This is enticingly beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
thanks everybody... Ed, i don't think so, but maybe I do have family in Florida Marge, and a beautiful song you are singing dear thanks again everyone else, its a pleasure to be back in here learning again. Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sounds like the "blue pages" speaking to us...  very nice write.. hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
thank you dg again for kind words... uhmm...do the blue pages really talk to you?? cause seriously, if they do...ya might wanna see 'bout that... lol thanks chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
uh..why, yes..yes they do...they speak in whispers..of many voices... heh heh... "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
Close your eyes and listen close it's the words I speak that mean the most Beautiful!! jinx |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
lol... and .. um... what exactly are these little voices saying? lol Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Oh...well..they say things like.. "Close your eyes and follow me I'll show you worlds you won't believe. I'll give you wings and take you far We'll cross the moon and chase a star..."  What..they don't speak to you??  "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
lol...yeah sometimes they do. My "shrink" tells me not to listen to them though... lol jk Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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