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Kathy
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

0 posted 2006-03-01 03:21 AM

Long we fell from that great height,
falling through the failing light.
From where
to here
to know
delight.
Oh, to fall from such a height!

Tell me how you feel despite
that wrong is wrong. Is it alright
to peer
to fear
to know
the fright,
that wrong is wrong and it's alright?

Lay down your troubled head this night.
No doubt your precious in his sight.
You hear
you care
you grow
despite,
that wrong is wrong, we're here tonight!

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

1 posted 2006-03-01 04:34 AM

Hi Kathy,

your poem really touched me. I almost come to tears after reading. Thanks. It's going into my keepings.

'Tell me how you feel despite
that wrong is wrong. Is it alright
to peer
to fear
to know
the fright,
that wrong is wrong and it's alright?

Lay down your troubled head this night.
No doubt your precious in his sight.
You hear
you care
you grow
despite,
that wrong is wrong, we're here tonight!'

desert-spike
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

2 posted 2006-03-01 05:31 AM

This touched me to my core

This reminds me of my ex, whom despite all I will love with every inch of me until the day my sould embraces the ether.

Wonderful write, yours is.

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

3 posted 2006-03-01 06:37 AM

it is absolutely alright, if you feel so.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-03-01 07:32 AM

this brought me to a place realizing
the knowing...the purpose, and the kindness in the wrongs, once they are again set upright...dear sweet lass of life...she sings greatness to our side
and you have inspired such a greatness of that life....

Hugs

nn
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

5 posted 2006-03-01 08:07 AM

Nice, nice and ...nice!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2006-03-01 09:47 AM

wonderful Kathy.
Keepin' this one.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-03-01 05:45 PM

Delicious Kathy! You sing so beautifully. I have to keep this one too.

Kathy
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

8 posted 2006-03-02 12:23 PM

Oh,

I didn't know it was "that" good...

I am going to read it again myself!

(kidding here).

Listen, I so appreciate each and every one of you.

You have made me "feel" at home" at your forum.

THANK YOU!

Hugs,
Kathy

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