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Open Poetry #37

I Hate Poems

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-03-02 06:19 AM

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I Hate Poems
28 February 2006

I hate poems
I hate the ones
that start the same
I hate all those poems
of one word to name

This act of repeating
one word several at a time
I hate those kind of poems
even if this was not a crime

I hate poems
I hate each line
I hate those poems
the ones that waste my time

This reign of repeat
that sensation lost in accord
I hate poems - since in life
hate was a word to ill afford

“No man can serve two masters: for either
he will hate one, and love the other; or else
he will hold to the one, and despise the other.
Ye cannot serve God and mammon. [Worldliness]”
Matthew 6: 24 KJV
[word in brackets added]

a poet who cares

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2006-03-02 09:30 AM

Sounds like you're going to be a Huan Yi fan.....

I do know what you mean, and this poem rang bells for me. As I said to someone recently, the same poem again and again, the same voice again and again....

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2006-03-02 12:31 PM

and I love Irony!!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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