How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » The Fallen
Open Poetry #37
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Fallen Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
UniqueFreak
Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 62
Scotland
0 posted 2006-02-28 09:17 PM

The Fallen

It's midnight every minute,
as i wait for each new day.
Hoping something wonderful,
is going to come my way.

But tomorrow never comes,
and disappointment takes it's toll.
Midnight's getting darker,
and it's smothering my soul.

I surrender to a jaded heart,
it reaps of pain unkown.
Not knowing why it's all so wrong,
or why im so alone.

Take this white flag from me,
before it catches the breeze.
Dont let me raise it above my head,
as i fall here on my knees.


© Copyright 2006 Stephanie Hill - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-03-01 05:35 PM



The feeling is so dismal Stepanie. Well written.

UniqueFreak
Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 62
Scotland
2 posted 2006-03-02 08:51 AM

thanks for feedback!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » The Fallen

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary