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Open Poetry #37
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Dominique-Simone
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0 posted 2006-02-18 10:27 PM


Good morning mental disability
Crackers left over from yesterday’s soup
Stale easily in this damp room

Guests awaken plainly next door
Without hesitating to use all the hot water
As I shiver with flannel pajamas

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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-02-18 10:38 PM



You set a great mood Page. Powerful work.


Dominique-Simone
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2 posted 2006-02-18 10:40 PM

Thank you Lady
dgvarner
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3 posted 2006-02-18 11:24 PM

leaves one in a thoughtful mood...interesting..

hugs,g

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Dominique-Simone
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4 posted 2006-02-19 11:40 AM

Thanks G... Yes it does. It is quite interesting. Glad you liked it.
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